Hi folks,
I have been lurking about since late summer, enjoying the great fan fiction. With some recent encouragement from Vicky and Jayel, I decided to try my hand at it too. Someone posted a couple of weeks ago wondering if and how Eden Advance would celebrate Christmas. I'm sorry now that I did not keep their name, because as I thought about it, I decided that I could write my version of their holiday, and I'd like to give credit where it's due. Anyway, this is my first attempt at fiction. Please give me any comments you can. I'd love to hear that you liked it (of course), but even more, I'd like some ideas on how to improve. Many thanks to Vicky for reading this story early and suggesting I go ahead and post it.